Samantha Twohig
ENT3003
Elevator Pitch No. 3
4/2/20
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BJcoBclKuxc
Based on my feedback, I did not change much of my product features, however based on personal experience with the violation of data privacy, it has further opened my eyes to the importance of fixing this issue.
Hi Samantha! I think you did your third pitch very well. You seemed to recite everything appropriately with no complications. I feel as though you spoke in a way that was not robotic but conversational, which is great when you’re trying to convey the issue of data privacy. I like how you touched on personal experiences with the issue. Great job!
ReplyDeleteHello Sam,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed they way your third elevator pitch is setup and presented very nice job. I think you did a very nice job of adding a working link to your post so you don't get taken off any points like I did last week. I feel like you were way mroe cofidnetnt in this pitch compared to the other two you have presented this year. Overall great job on this one if you keep practicing it can perfect!!!
Hey Samantha,
ReplyDeleteI agree data privacy is an under the radar issue that many people fail to realize because the convenience of their electronic devices outweighs the importance of keeping their information safe online. I agree with Nick, this is an issue that needs to be approached with sentiment and you portrayed that making the the pitch seem more conversational and important to me in a way that most pitches don't convey. To me you're selling safety not a product and that has more value. Good post!
Samantha,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your elevator pitch! I can tell you were much more relaxed this time around, and I thought your outfit was really professional. I like how you were able to properly emphasize the features of your product and reassure customers of its' utility. Your pitch and tone was very professional, and gave me a sense of security when examining the prospect of purchasing your product. Your pitch really gave me some inspiration for any future pitches I may do, and I thank you for sharing!