Samantha, Great pitch. I like that you insinuated a sense of urgency. I think your delivery flowed very well. I was especially engaged with your ending when you stated whose privacy it is. It might be beneficial to say that as an opener to your pitch. Though I would say your lighting was not the best due to the bulb behind you, overall, your pitch was fantastic.
Great Post! I like how you posed your pitch as an emergency that needed to be taken care of. The urgency of making sure our information online is safe is very important to me as well and I think this would be a great idea.
This was a really good elevator pitch! I like how you dressed professionally and varied your tone and pitch. It is really evident that you took the time to prepare and practice this speech. You also seemed to be very relaxed and confident during your presentation. Prompting your customers to take urgent action was also a really effective way of convincing them to buy the product. Thank you for sharing!
Samantha,
ReplyDeleteGreat pitch. I like that you insinuated a sense of urgency. I think your delivery flowed very well. I was especially engaged with your ending when you stated whose privacy it is. It might be beneficial to say that as an opener to your pitch. Though I would say your lighting was not the best due to the bulb behind you, overall, your pitch was fantastic.
Hello Samantha,
ReplyDeleteGreat Post! I like how you posed your pitch as an emergency that needed to be taken care of. The urgency of making sure our information online is safe is very important to me as well and I think this would be a great idea.
Samantha,
ReplyDeleteThis was a really good elevator pitch! I like how you dressed professionally and varied your tone and pitch. It is really evident that you took the time to prepare and practice this speech. You also seemed to be very relaxed and confident during your presentation. Prompting your customers to take urgent action was also a really effective way of convincing them to buy the product. Thank you for sharing!